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03 September 2004 @ 01:39 am
slashy fic, and QES 4-9  
Here are the Quick Episode Summaries (QES) for epsides four through nine. I very much doubt anyone is worried about spoilers, but they're lj-cut anyway.

Writers: This episode has no purpose.
Audience: Then we can skip it, right?
Writers: No, because just like every other episode in this series, there's important plot stuff you can't miss.
Audience: Dammit.
Writers: But to make up for it, here's a cool train robbery episode!
Audience: Yay!

Roy: I'm just yankin' your chain.
Hakuro: Don't I look like a good guy? See, I even have a wife and kids!
Bard: Nobody move!
Ed: Except us. To the batmobile, Al!
Al: Okay, but don't fall off any moving trains.
Hughes: *catch*
Ed: Eheh, my bad.
*Ed and Al kick some major ass*
Hughes: Hey!
Ed: Sorry, foot slipped.

Nina: Look at me! I'm so cute! I'm so lovable! Big Brothers, you'll love me, right? WHEE!
Ed: No way. We're rough and tough alchemists.
Ed: Argh, dammit! No way! I'm too manly for that sort of thing!
Nina: WHEE!
Ed: Gah... fine. I love you too.
Hughes: Please, Edward-kun, allow me to introduce you to a fleeting moment of precious domestic bliss, so that it will be all the more poignant when it later gets ripped away.
Ed: Don't mind if I do.
Fuhrer: Look, he passed the exam with flying colors. Get it? Flying colors! Ha ha!
Roy: Permission to shoot myself, sir.
Fuhrer: Denied.

Tucker: I go the quiet kind of psycho.
Ed: TUCKER, YOU FUCKING BASTARD! I'm going to strangle you with my bare hands!
Al: Niisan, wait, no! Remember those waivers we signed? No strangling!
Ed: Oh, dammit. Well, can I stab the bastard?
Al: No.
Ed: Target practice?
Al: No.
Ed: Dynamite?
Al: Sorry, no.
Ed: Umm... can I shove my hand through his chest?
Al: Not for another thirty-four episodes... no.
Ed: Dammit! Well, I guess I'll just whale on him, then.
Ninalex: Don't you be hatin' on my dad, bitch.
Basque "We Hates Him Precious" Gran: Move out, everybody.
Scar: My arm talks to me.

Ed: Obviously, the best way to revenge Nina's death is to strip myself of all the resources I might need to pursue it.
Al: I hate having to be the rational one.
Ed: That's why I never do it.
Winry: I randomly appear in this episode! And I refer to myself in the third person!
Barry: I'm creepier than any man in a dress has any right to be.
Ed: And I'm smart enough to figure out where the murderer is, but dumb enough to get whacked on the head from behind.
*Ed performs a-fuckin-mazing alchemy with one hand missing and the other tied behind his back*
Ed: Oh, no! I'm so helpless!
*Ed lays beatdown on Barry*
Ed: Oh, no! I'm so weak!
*Ed prepares to skewer Barry through the chest*
Ed: Oh, no! He's going to kill me! Why am I so worthless?
Al: Hey, Niisan, just in case you'd forgotten, I WANT MY BODY BACK, yo.
Ed: Oh yeah, that.

Ed: I'm depressed.
Al: I'm worried.
Roy: I'm manipulative.
Villagers: We're ungrateful.
Yoki: I'm corrupt.
Lyla: I'm not, despite all appearances, a random throwaway character designed to portray the alchemists who sells her soul for favors.
Audience: Sure you're not.
Lyla: Okay, okay, I'm just here to wear the maid outfit.
Ed: Can this flashback be over already? Geez, it's been going on for six episodes now.

And now, slashyfic. I know, this is cliche, it's been done before -- but the bunny wanted to be written, so it's written. Not as well as it could be, but... Ah well.

Title: Learning Experience
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: humor, yaoi, inappropriate uses for alchemy
Spoilers: None.
Pairing: Roy+Ed

"Human transmutation?"

Gold eyes looked up from the file, startled. Colonel Mustang folded his hands together and nodded, gravely. "At least," he said, "That is what the report we got from the witness states."

Ed's mouth tightened, and he crumpled the paper in one gloved fist. "Consider me on it," he said. "I'll go to Sanborn and investigate."

Roy nodded, glad that Ed was taking his assignment seriously for a change. But then, he was like that whenever it came to a clue that might help restore his brother and himself. He was singleminded on that purpose, and no other. Alas.

"According to the report, this store --" Roy pushed the address across the counter -- "is actually a front for the illegal alchemy business."

Ed nodded, eyes already moving rapidly over the file, absorbing the little information that was provided. "Train tickets are already at the station?" he said absently.

"Yes. You leave this afternoon."

+ + +

A train ride, a night's stopover at a motel, and the next morning found Ed in Sanborn, lingering casually around the street where the store was located. Most stores usually had a brightly lettered sign out front, but this one had only a discreet name underneath a concealing awning. Interesting, Edward observed.

The morning wore on. Customers came by the store, and unless it was Ed's paranoia at work, they had a furtive, hunted air. He wished there was a restaurant or something nearby where he could sit and observe, and not just look like a vagrant. Several of the shop's customers were well-dressed, he noted with interest. More than one person left with packages; interestingly shaped packages wrapped in plain brown paper. No labels.

This just got more and more interesting. Ed sidled a little closer, hoping to get a better look at one of the mysterious packages. This definitely had the feel of an illicit organization, but what did it have to do with human transmuation?

He must have set off some kind of trigger, though, because out of nowhere, a bear of a policeman came striding up to him. "What are you doing here?" the man asked brusquely. "This isn't the kind of area for children to be lingering in."

Ed allowed himself to be shepherded away, but inside, he was making plans for a night assault. This wasn't good. If the local law enforcement knew that something sneaky was going on, but were taking no steps to prevent it -- there was no way of knowing how deep this went.

+ + +

"Niisan, are you sure this is a good idea?" Al whispered as they crept towards the darkened shop that night. "What if we get caught?"

"Then I'll show them my watch," Ed answered grimly, holding up the shielded lantern, "and pull rank."

"And if they attack us?" For an invincible suit of armor that couldn't even feel pain, Al had no right to sound that nervous, Ed reflected.

"Then we'll kick their asses, of course." Ed tested the door; it was locked, of course, so he resorted to the simple expedient of transmuting the door open. The brothers slipped inside, Al shutting the door carefully behind them.

"Look around for a back room or trapdoor," Ed ordered. "If they're conducting secret experiments in human transmuation in here, it won't be right out in front."

"Yes, but what kind of shop is this, Niisan?" Al wondered around. He was poking around the racks up front, even as Ed searched for a trapdoor. Metal clinked, and Ed looked up.

"Does it matter?" Still, Ed turned up the flame on the shielded lantern, spreading more light over the shop's interior. The light reflected from a baffling assortment of objects, and gleamed off half a dozen arrays.

"Eh?" Puzzled, Al bent towards the racks again. "Niisan, it seems to be a shop for selling alchemy."

"That doesn't make any sense," Ed said, bewildered. "Alchemy is intended for the public good. If it wasn't anything illegal, why the need for secrecy?" One gloved hand reached into a brightly colored pile, and came up with a strange assortment of metal and fur, inscribed with a simple array. "And are these handcuffs?"

Al squeaked, and froze. Ed glanced over at his brother, puzzled by the noise. "Al, don't tell me you have any more small furry creatures inside you," he said suspiciously.

"N-no," Al said, shakily. Ed scowled, and swung the light over the other merchandise.

"Anyway, what is all this stuff? Clothes... really weird clothes... why would anyone need clothes with arrays on them?" He bent to examine the arrays closely, touching one finger to them without lighting them up. "This one would just tear these pants into ribbons. What's the use of that?"

"Niisan... maybe you shouldn't be touching anything else..." Al began nervously. Honestly, for an older brother, Ed wasn't catching on very fast. Al knew his brother was obsessed with the search for the stone, but didn't he take the time to talk to his fellow soldiers?

"What's this, some kind of weapon?" Ed grumbled, plucking up a short silver rod from a row of others. He turned it over in his hands, glancing over the different symbols in the array. "This junk... arrays to heat up... cool down... what's this, a size expander? The hell is that for? And this one... I don't even recognize it!" The thought of an unfamiliar alchemical symbol offended his pride, of course, and he couldn't rest until he activated it.

He yelped and nearly dropped the thing when it began to rattle in his hands. "Dammit! That surprised me! What the hell his this junk?" He moved off to rifle through a stack of flimsy papers, each one sporting an array of its own.

"Niisan," Al said, exasperated. "You're a boy, aren't you? Figure it out!"

"Huh?" Ed looked back at his brother, baffled. Al would have blushed if he could; who would have ever thought that he'd be the one explaining this to his elder brother?

"This is a store... you know... for adults," Al waffled a bit. "It looks like they're using alchemical reactions just as... umm... aides to the normal course of things."

"You're not making sense, Al," Ed scowled. "Human transmutation..."

"Has nothing to do with this," Al said firmly. "Niisan... please... put that down."

He explained. And since only the dead could have slept through the commotion Ed caused then, he explained again when the constables came to investigate.

+ + +

Roy Mustang had gotten the call, and posted bail as obligated, but he still wasn't quite clear on the details. So when Edward burst into his office in a high temper, he was looking forward to getting some information.

Assuming, of course, that Ed didn't kill him first. Roy was used to that, although he couldn't really remember what he'd done to deserve it this time.

"Calm down before you burst something, Fullmetal," Roy said mildly, in a tone that brought Edward up just short of his desk. "What did you discover?"

"Did you know that you were sending me to an alchemical porn shop?" Edward demanded, in full voice.

Roy blinked, and ran the last few seconds over in his mind. No, this wasn't one of his recurring fantasies; Edward had actually said that. "Try that again, Edward-kun," he said. "Preferably in more detail, and lower volume, please."

"You bastard! You knew, didn't you? Human transmutation my ass! Or not mine, anyone's! I don't believe some of the things they were selling there!"

This really was too bizarre. Roy pulled out his file, and glanced at it. "The witness reported, and I quote, that the proprieters of that store were performing 'doing strange alchemy on people,' " he recited. "Was that not human transmutation, then?"

The sound of Ed grinding his teeth was clearly audible halfway across the room. "Like hell it was," he said. "That store was selling alchemical sex toys. There wasn't anything to do with transformation there, not in the store, not in the basement, not even so much as a still! I checked. And I think I'm scarred for life, now, but there wasn't anything illegal at all! The whole thing was a waste of time!"

Roy thought about that. Thought about a store that sold alchemical sex toys. Thought about Ed being scarred for life.

At last he could only offer, "Did you buy anything, then? For the sake of research, of course," he added hastily as Ed's face darkened.

"Get fucking serious!" Ed slammed his hands down on Roy's desk, spilling the precarious stacks of documents onto the floor. Roy couldn't say he particularly minded. "Do you know who audits my expense accounts? Lieutenant Hawkeye, that's who! What would she say if she saw something like that on there?"

"She would think you were growing up at last," Roy mused, "and probably wonder who was the lucky soul you decided to try them out with."

Ed was staring at him like he'd sprouted a second head, and Roy bit his tongue. Oh, damn. That was a little too obvious for even the single-minded Ed to pass over. He attempted to resolve his expression to a cool and disinterested one, and stared back at Ed.

"You did send me there on purpose," Ed said at last, but he didn't sound nearly as angry as Roy would have expected. "Pervert."

"I assure you I knew nothing of this," Roy swore solemnly. Of course, whether he would have sent Ed even if he had known, well, that was a different matter.

"Hmph." Ed snorted, and leaned back a trifle. He was eyeing Roy with distinct interest, though, which Roy decided to interpret as a hopeful sign. After all, he was fairly confident that even if Edward did try to rip his head off, he was still fast enough to get the drop on the boy.

"So you didn't retain anything from that trip at all?" Roy said with regret. He smiled, slowly, in a way he usually reserved for outside the office. "A pity. It would have been... instructive."

"Well," Ed said abruptly. "It's not like I didn't learn anything from it. I mean, there were some new kinds of Arrays there that I'd never seen before, if you can believe it. But now..." His fingers traced over Roy's desktop, outlining a pattern that Roy only vaguely recognized. What he did recognize stimulated his heartbeat, as well as other areas.

"I see." He pushed his chair closer to the desk. "You are a fast learner, I take it, Fullmetal."

"The fastest," Ed promised him. And at Roy's inviting gesture, he leaned forward over the desk, and met Roy's kiss halfway.

Ed wasn't lying. He was a fast leaner. And his powers of retention were excellent.

Current Mood: nervousnervous
Current Music: Ripples By The Drop - Haibane Renmei
Asimuthasimuth on September 3rd, 2004 02:29 am (UTC)
I'm not one to flame someone, nor will I start now, but...

None of those episodes were fillers, they all related to the story of how they got to where they were. I know it was done with good intentions and humor in mind, I laughed at some stuff myself. But when you insult the episodes and the characters, I find it kind of silly and a bit difficult to think you're even a fan of the series. I can be wrong ::shrug:: I'm not passing judgement.
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 03:00 am (UTC)
Well, we may have to just agree to disagree. Of course I'm in love with the series. One of the ways that I express my love is by teasing and parody. I'm kind of sorry if you can't be entertained by that, but it's not going to stop me.

I could, if you wanted, give you a critical rundown on why I thought episode 4 was lacking compared to the other episodes in the show. I'm not sure what you saw and interpreted as being insulting to the characters, but rest assured that I love all of them (well, with the exception of Hakuro and Basque "We Hates Him Precious" Gran) too.
anax imperatoranax on September 3rd, 2004 04:17 am (UTC)
I completely agree with mikkeneko. Ep 4 was total filler, and not even amusing filler. If you can point out a single thing about that ep that couldn't have been cut out completely without any damage to the plot, please let me know. I can point out a large number of plot holes and utter randomness in it. It's a shame it's at such an early point in the series, too.
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 01:40 pm (UTC)
On one hand, it *does* have a few plot points; we see Lust for the first time (chronologically) albiet only for a few seconds. Since she doesn't turn up again in the flashback, we must assume that that's where Ed thought he recognized her from in episode 1. On the other hand, she didn't do anything.

That episode also set the precedent for what they'll do a lot later on; wandering around solving alchemical mysteries and helping people. (I wonder, how much of Ed's desire randomly help people out ultimately stemmed from that one comment of Al's in the coach?) It was also the first time we saw anyone using an item imbued with an array to do alchemy.

Nevertheless, despite this being the first time for a lot of these things, it wasn't necessary for any of them to happen at that time. My biggest beef with the episode was that a part of it was terribly misleading. Majhal takes one look at Al and recognizes him for what he is. Because of that, the audience is left to assume that any competant alchemist will be able to do the same. It wasn't until much later in the series that I realized Al's condition was being kept a secret, because how secret could it be if the first person who looked at him after it happened recognized him?
anax imperatoranax on September 3rd, 2004 02:07 pm (UTC)
Ed has a really damned good memory if he can remember Lust after glimpsing her, in the dark, for about 3 seconds, 4 years prior to when he sees her again in Lior. I mean, that's just supernatural. Preferably, I'd like to believe that he saw her around East City sometime during the years that were skipped - she seems to know a little bit about him, and I can't assume that she had any reason to specifically focus on Edward before the incidents in Eps 1 and 2 so she must have just heard about him by rep. There is really no reason to think that he saw her somewhere else, but the alternative is to believe that Ed has a computer chip implanted in his brain. :)

Do they spend a lot of time wandering around solving mysteries? There's a large fanon basis for this, but I can't tell from canon that they deliberately did very much that wasn't either 1. assigned, or 2. potentially philstone- or HT-related. Before the plot really picks up, they:

Ep 1&2 - investigated Lior (both assigned and potentially philstone-related)
Ep 3 - nothing
Ep 4 - the Majhal thing (potentially HT-related by virtue of Ed recognizing Majhal as someone their dad once knew)
Ep 5 - The Great Train Hijacking (unrelated to HT or the philstone, happened on top of them)
Ep 6 - nothing
Ep 7 - nosed around Tucker's research (unrelated to HT or the philstone, happened on top of them)
Ep 8 - tried to nose around in the Nina thing, successfully nosed around in the Barry thing (unrelated to HT or the philstone, happened on top of them)
Ep 9 - investigated Youswell (assigned)
Ep 10 - investigated Psiren (unrelated to HT or the philstone, basically this one was Ed being nosy)
Ep 11&12 - investigated Zenotime (potentially philstone-related)
Ep 13 - tried to investigate Marcoh (potentially philstone-related) did not succeed
Ep 14 - investigated Marcoh (potentially philstone-related)

This is the point at which I consider the larger plot to really begin. So we have 1 completely random investigation, with everything else being either an assignment, something that railroaded into them, or something was related to HT and/or the philstone. Aside from the Psiren thing, Ed and Al seem pretty single-minded in pursuing HT/philstone information, and Psiren seemed to mostly be due to Ed being mad that he was inconvenienced.

My problem with Ep 4 is twofold - you could slice it right out of the series and never miss it (as long as you excised the one later random reference to it), and the blatant plotholes. The one later random reference even contradicts a lot of the stuff that preceded it - Greed made a big deal over the fact that Ed had never killed anybody, and Ed does not dispute this, and even freaks out when he does finally kill Greed, and then ... it turns out he DOES believe that he's killed someone before? RANDOMNESS! *quiet now*
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 02:32 pm (UTC)
Ed's always rather blasé about things that happen unless they impact him personally -- which makes Episode 4 all the weirder, since he has no personal motive for getting involved in that situation.

The wandering around helping people is largely expounded in canon, since he spends too much of the series itself doing plot-related things. I was referring mostly to the first 13 or 14 episodes of the series -- even if his primary reason for being there was HT/PS related, he often took time out to help people whom he could have ignored.

I also count assignments. There was nothing to stop Ed in episode 9 from taking the commissioner's bribe and leaving the villagers, ingrates that they were, to their fate. There was no real need to expose Cornello to his followers in Liore, when Ed was perfectly capable of just smiting him, taking the Stone, and getting out of the city before anyone could stop him. How he chooses to complete his assignments is more important than whether they were assigned or not.

Ed has a really damned good memory if he can remember Lust after glimpsing her, in the dark, for about 3 seconds, 4 years prior to when he sees her again in Lior.

*snickers* I know! It doesn't seem likely, does it? Would have made so much more sense for him to have never seen Lust before in episode 1.

However, I do believe that Lust and the others might have been watching almost from the beginning of his career. They are actively on the lookout for people like him, remember?

The moment that Envy became scary to me -- actively scar, not just interesting villain/creepy -- was the moment in... episode 14, is it? when the Sins are sitting around talking, and Envy randomly shifts shape into Edward, pretends to cut his own throat, and then shifts back. That really freaked me out, because it meant that they've been watching Ed, following his movements, could probably choose to strike at him at any time, and he doesn't even know it. *shivers*
anax imperatoranax on September 3rd, 2004 03:16 pm (UTC)
There was no real need to expose Cornello to his followers in Liore, when Ed was perfectly capable of just smiting him, taking the Stone, and getting out of the city before anyone could stop him.

Well, he DID say "give me your philstone and I won't tell your followers that you're a fake." :) I think he went to the trouble of exposing Cornello mainly because Cornello inconvenienced him by refusing. Eps 1 and 2 have a kind of OOC Edward, compared with the rest of the series, though. The writers didn't seem to have a very solid grip on him.

However, I do believe that Lust and the others might have been watching almost from the beginning of his career. They are actively on the lookout for people like him, remember?

Yes ... however, they weren't focusing solely on Edward, they seem to have made numerous attempts. The business with Cornello, in fact, was pulled off specifically to lure people like Edward out of the woodwork. I'm not sure there was any reason for them to think, prior to the events in Ep 1, that Edward was anybody special as far as they were concerned.
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 04:01 pm (UTC)
You don't mind if I friend you, do you? Cos your episode parodies rocked.
anax imperatoranax on September 3rd, 2004 04:08 pm (UTC)
Of course I don't mind. :) Of course, since you just combed through my LJ, you know that I haven't been posting the parodies very frequently lately.
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 04:15 pm (UTC)
Yes, but I don't mind. ^_^ I like having people with good senses of humor on my flist, it keeps it interesting to look at.
Hungry Hungry Mongoosenzmongoose on September 3rd, 2004 02:30 am (UTC)
*Ed and Al kick some major ass*
Hughes: Hey!
Ed: Sorry, foot slipped.

That is pure and utter genius.
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 03:01 am (UTC)
Ah, I loved that episode so much. Although the pun didn't occur to me until after I'd written the QES. *hee*
Coral: Ed (taostrife)hanakirei85 on September 3rd, 2004 03:16 am (UTC)
Scar: My arm talks to me.

*can't stop giggling* XD;
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 03:17 am (UTC)
Not half so bizarre as the way he starts 'seeing' with that arm later on.

Glad I could amuse.
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on September 3rd, 2004 08:12 am (UTC)
Oh god, Al speaks gh3tt0, y0 XD
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 01:23 pm (UTC)
Heaven knows where he picked it up. I wonder if his brother knows what sort of people he's been hanging out with. >_>;
腹蛇youkofujima on September 3rd, 2004 06:12 pm (UTC)
Maybe he got the wrong soul into the armour? XD can you imagine if Ed was trying to do the transmutation and he ends up shoving a ...girl's soul into the armour XD;
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 07:08 pm (UTC)
Oh lord. *dies laughing* I don't even want to think about the plotbunnies that could produce...

Or what if he was *sharing* the armor with another spirit, like #48? (and correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't his proper name be #48 and #49? Unless they were #4 and #8...) He could walk around arguing with himself, and people would think he's a huge armor freak and crazy.
angsty lemon ukewabisuke on September 3rd, 2004 08:54 am (UTC)
Ah man, that was awesome. The kicking major ass comment is the best. XD

(btw, rose jam really does exist. i got some in france and it tastes like...i'm not sure how to describe it. it's very sweet but doesn't have a fruit texture. you think the jam is weird? try the ice cream. besticecreamintheworld.)
mikkeneko on September 3rd, 2004 01:34 pm (UTC)
If I ever encounter some, I'll have to try it. I mean, it can't be any stranger than green tea ice cream. ^^;
angsty lemon uke: [luv] // divine_rosewabisuke on September 3rd, 2004 01:58 pm (UTC)
green tea ice cream never hit me as good. then again, i never had any since i was a kid.

And yes, you must try it. Nummers.