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16 August 2004 @ 12:01 am
Goodnight, Goodbye EXTRA  
aka: I have conquered the automail sex.

WARNING: ELRICEST SMUT. Nothing too explicit, but I'll slap that warning on anyway. This is most likely R-15.

This is not really a continuation of the "Goodnight, Goodbye" preview I posted up before as it is more of a sigment of what flashed through my mind when I was thinking about the whole premise of "Goodnight, Goodbye."

Title: Goodnight, Goodbye (EXTRA)
Pairing: Edward/Alphonse
Genre: Angst
Basics: Edward comtemplates himself as he beds Alphonse. yeah.

This page is nothing but kissing, actually...but even kissing is >_< for me, so I actually had to reference Jo Chen's "Other Side of the Mirror" for this. Hahaha XD; I suck. Sorry about the poor toning job, too.

This page is mostly all my own paneling and poses, so I'm actually proud of that. It's just that drawing automail is so hard to do^^; that I really try to avoid it, but I really can't here.^^;

Text is in Mandarin.

Edward: God...I must be...a very horrible person, aren't I?

For this page, I had to reference Takashima Kazusa's "Wild Rock" as well as more of Jo Chen's stuff. The automail...it kills me...nuu... And really, Edward's face in the last panel looks really weird

Edward: Even though I know that this is a taboo...I would still continue...to violate it.

This is kinda like a filler page cuz I didn't want to draw anymore smut (it's fun, but it's also a LOT of work XD), and it's more like a probe into what Edward is thinking as he's committing this sin towards his brother. He's thinking about what he's done by trying to revive his mother, and how different it is from what Tucker did to Nina.

Edward: Perhaps I am like the way Tucker describes me. I go and try something out because the possibility was laid out before me. And that is why I keep my little brother around me like this...for me to destroy as I please---

This is the last page...there really is no ending (pr plot) involved in this, but that's the end of this one. I used a lot of tones to try and give out the dark mood in this...and also tried out the moonlight tone that I've always wanted to give a try for Sorry Alphonse's anatomy is horrible.

Edward: But me...and Al...are connected by sin---

No more Suikoden music for Youko. no no no.

cross-posted to fm_alchemist, fma_yaoi, and elricest
Current Mood: tiredtired
Current Music: "Imaginary World"--Suikoden
Daisydaisysparrow on August 15th, 2004 09:19 pm (UTC)
Cooollllll!!!!! *drool* Draw more, PLEASE!
腹蛇: Whew sleepy (screen by darkkairachan)youkofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:28 pm (UTC)
I probably would, but ^^; oh my god it's so much work... *sigh* And right now I'm thinking about working on another short one named "Gibbs." But thank you for liking it^^
Shiva: boysex makes me sparkle // kindermordershiva_chan on August 15th, 2004 09:26 pm (UTC)

I think I squeal EVERY time I see human!Al, I adore him THAT much.

So yes, major squealing was done, along with feeling bad for Ed's angst as he beds his bro.
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:29 pm (UTC)
Haha, thank you X3 I tend to squeal whenever I see human!Alphonse as well. He's just too adorable... *sigh*
Kalika Maxwellkalikamaxwell on August 15th, 2004 09:30 pm (UTC)
/But me...and Al...are connected by sin---/

That line. I just LOVE that line. @_@

Eee, fluffy angst! It's so sweet and so sad at once. The last page is my favorite. *clings* I luv you! Please draw more sometimes!
i am a jedi, like my father before me: twistertatooine on August 15th, 2004 10:05 pm (UTC)
I agree -- love the line, love the story in general.

*fangirls rabidly*
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腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you X3 I guess people like the nekkid Alphonse, huh?^^
always count on a murderer for a fancy prose stylemeasuringlife on August 16th, 2004 12:40 am (UTC)

Wow... Just WOW. You're amazing~<3
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you for liking it^^/
Junie: Elric brothers - by yuzu_chancherrylilwolf on August 16th, 2004 02:10 am (UTC)

It's just so beautiful and I love the last page <33 Being able to read chinese helps too XD It being written in Chinese seems to bring out the story more ^^
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you^^

I write most, if not all of my doujins (that I ink and scan) in Mandarin, because it just brings out the emotions better...there are more words to describe certain feelings and situations in Mandarin than in English, in my opinion.^^
brittdaemonicangel on August 16th, 2004 03:16 am (UTC)

Very nice. ^^ Don't beat yourself up so bad, I think the drawing was done great, who cares if you had to use some references in certain places? It's a better choice than having to possible mangle up anatomy and poses. ;p

I loved all of Ed's dialogue in this extra story. It so sounded like him brooding. ♥
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you XD I guess referencing is better...as long as you can do it...? (I referenced it rather badly, but^^;;;)

He's just a major sulky guy. XD;
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腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:34 pm (UTC)
Hahahah XD Thank you for liking it XD

Edward...I think he'll continue to angst everytime he sexes Alphonse up... XD; ("I love it, and I love Alphonse, but I'm committing a sin! CRAP!!"--mentality XD;)
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Katnilyveth on August 16th, 2004 12:24 pm (UTC)
Oh.My.FxxxING.God. I love you very very much right now. May I add you to my LJ friends list? Wouldn't want to miss any more of this. Wow.
腹蛇: Precious laughteryoukofujima on August 16th, 2004 12:35 pm (UTC)
(*loves your icon* *wants that game*)

Thank you for liking it^^/ And sure, you may add me to your flist.^^ I'll add you back as well (since the LJ is semi-friends only. I lock all my yaoi pics.)
mukashi mukashimukashi_mukashi on August 17th, 2004 10:13 am (UTC)
I love the third page so much, especially the first frame of it. it melts me. and Ed's word choice in it is haunting. very good job!

and may I add you to my friends list as well?
腹蛇youkofujima on August 17th, 2004 05:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much X3 The first frame took me a very long time to get just right...because of that leg^^;;

Of course you may!^^ And if you want to see small doodles and stuff like that, I can add you back as well.
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rose_nightshade on August 20th, 2004 08:46 pm (UTC)
ack! the sweet angsty cuteness!!!! *makes hearts at the artist/author* i love it!
腹蛇youkofujima on August 21st, 2004 01:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you for liking it. X3 it's currently down due to problems with Spores.net, though. >_
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wai!! i can't see `em!!! *sob!*
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