腹蛇 (youkofujima) wrote in fm_alchemist,
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Goodnight, Goodbye EXTRA

aka: I have conquered the automail sex.

WARNING: ELRICEST SMUT. Nothing too explicit, but I'll slap that warning on anyway. This is most likely R-15.

This is not really a continuation of the "Goodnight, Goodbye" preview I posted up before as it is more of a sigment of what flashed through my mind when I was thinking about the whole premise of "Goodnight, Goodbye."

Title: Goodnight, Goodbye (EXTRA)
Pairing: Edward/Alphonse
Genre: Angst
Basics: Edward comtemplates himself as he beds Alphonse. yeah.



This page is nothing but kissing, actually...but even kissing is >_< for me, so I actually had to reference Jo Chen's "Other Side of the Mirror" for this. Hahaha XD; I suck. Sorry about the poor toning job, too.


This page is mostly all my own paneling and poses, so I'm actually proud of that. It's just that drawing automail is so hard to do^^; that I really try to avoid it, but I really can't here.^^;

Text is in Mandarin.

Edward: God...I must be...a very horrible person, aren't I?


For this page, I had to reference Takashima Kazusa's "Wild Rock" as well as more of Jo Chen's stuff. The automail...it kills me...nuu... And really, Edward's face in the last panel looks really weird

Edward: Even though I know that this is a taboo...I would still continue...to violate it.


This is kinda like a filler page cuz I didn't want to draw anymore smut (it's fun, but it's also a LOT of work XD), and it's more like a probe into what Edward is thinking as he's committing this sin towards his brother. He's thinking about what he's done by trying to revive his mother, and how different it is from what Tucker did to Nina.

Edward: Perhaps I am like the way Tucker describes me. I go and try something out because the possibility was laid out before me. And that is why I keep my little brother around me like this...for me to destroy as I please---


This is the last page...there really is no ending (pr plot) involved in this, but that's the end of this one. I used a lot of tones to try and give out the dark mood in this...and also tried out the moonlight tone that I've always wanted to give a try for Sorry Alphonse's anatomy is horrible.

Edward: But me...and Al...are connected by sin---


No more Suikoden music for Youko. no no no.

cross-posted to fm_alchemist, fma_yaoi, and elricest
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