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14 August 2004 @ 02:26 am
Smutty Greed fanart  
I posted the WIP of this to fma_yaoi a few days ago, but realized that--because there is only one guy in the picture--it doesn't actually count as yaoi. So I thought I'd share it with y'all as well, you *cough* lucky people you.

Because I'm lazy, I used the revered Coloring for the Lazy(tm) technique, but I'm actually quite pleased with the turn out.

Warnings: NC-17 for full-frontal and my ability to not see Suck.






all in all, not a bad finish. From my point of view. C/C greatly appreciated.

tentatively x-posted to fma_yaoi
 
 
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ha_kun on August 14th, 2004 02:53 am (UTC)
Awesome deception..? Of an 'hard on'. -Dies laughing- Yay for bad jokes. :D;;;
Appetizers for men! POW!: Hells Yeahjpegasus on August 14th, 2004 10:53 am (UTC)
That's correct, Edo. You know Envy wants in on this ;)

*wubwub*
nix___: :Onix___ on August 14th, 2004 03:29 am (UTC)
What she said. *dies*

Bloody brilliant :D

On the C+c side, more detail in his hands and feet will make the picture even better. Like, on his right hand, if there is the highlight of bones under skin, there wouldn't be cresents of black at the knuckles.

Great work!! ^__^
Appetizers for men! POW!: grood (?)jpegasus on August 14th, 2004 10:49 am (UTC)
Hands and feet are one of my serious weak points. But at least I know it, so I'm trying. ^^ Thanks for the input.
Paurapaura on August 14th, 2004 07:13 am (UTC)
Hah! Hard on... xD You make me giggle. I love the picture and the line art is excellent. I do agree that more details on the hands and feet would be nice. ^^

Also, adding in some sort of a background (not sure what...) would help, but mostly adding more shadows and shading to the skin to really bring out muscles and features would help greatly to make the image less flat. ^_^ You have a lot of talent and just the extra jump of effort could make this an insanely good pic. :D It's awesome that you said you were lazy and it came out this good though. ^_^ <3
Appetizers for men! POW!: thumbsup! (maddpuss)jpegasus on August 14th, 2004 10:52 am (UTC)
Thank you very much ^^

Yeah, besides my usual tendencies to not draw a background at all, I really had no idea what to do for this pic, bg-wise. I think I used up all my creativity >->

I usually do a bit more shadow work, like when I've got my markers, but unfortunately my last picture killed them ded, so that's out until I can buy more. V-V

I was just gonna leave it as a sketch, but I was extremely to the power of 'dear lord strik me down dead' bored last night.

And I love your icon X3
Paurapaura on August 14th, 2004 05:16 pm (UTC)
Sankyuu ^_^ Maybe you could make a background by splicing up the homunculus symbol and other such things to make some sort of collage? xD would-be backgrounds when you don't feel like doing a background usually turn out best when you take a bunch of pics and toss them in a blender :D
snarkymonkey on August 14th, 2004 07:57 am (UTC)
Heh, heh. Greed fanart is always good. Lazy technique or no, you did a fine job. Niiiiiiice.
Appetizers for men! POW!: greed smirkjpegasus on August 14th, 2004 10:53 am (UTC)
Greed fanart is always good. Thank you! ^^;
a fangirltreesock on August 14th, 2004 12:33 pm (UTC)
best. icon. ever.
snarkymonkey on August 14th, 2004 12:55 pm (UTC)
*glee* I wish I could take credit for it. Alas, I'm not talented enough to create something like this. I have to beg other people to make it. *grins* It's all thanks to ciceqi.
Aristide: Al feels Pretty // nagisathesisaristide on August 14th, 2004 10:01 am (UTC)
*giggle* x3
Mmm, Greed.
I think the major crit I'd have for this is either Background or smoothing out the line art, both of which would benefit this.
Appetizers for men! POW!: Gasp! (base by maddpuss)jpegasus on August 14th, 2004 10:50 am (UTC)
Re: *giggle* x3
Yes, that's my other weak point. Or maybe it's a strong point?

"Hey everyone! Look at my amazing ability to completely NOT DRAW A BACKGROUND! :D"...

thanks ^^
Kalika Maxwellkalikamaxwell on August 14th, 2004 12:30 pm (UTC)
Everybody else already said what could be improved, so I'll just do the fangirl squealing part. Mwahaha, great use of the shield, I like how it's colored. <3

I'll be writing for Greed soon, I swear. I just need to kick this odd sort of writer's block I have. *wibbles*