About the story: First, and most importantly, its yaoi. Its Ed/Roy, with Ed being in his early twenties, and it will be rated M for sex, violence and death.
About my writing: I really need a beta who will tell me like it is. I am awful with punctuation and verb tenses. I am well aware of this fault and need someone who can help fix those errors. I would also really like someone who will not be afraid to point out any gaping holes in my plot, and be willing to point to a section and say "this doesn't make any damn sense!"
If you're interested, please drop me a message and we'll talk about it!