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27 October 2010 @ 04:02 pm
Jewel (part 2 {reposted})  
Title: Jewel
Author: nimrodel_13
Rating: NC-17 (Bathroom sex...against a wall...)
Pairing: RoyxEd
Word Count:
Summary: It's not the colorful, flashing lights or the pounding beat of the music or even the crush of bodies upon the dance floor. It's just them and the heat and they way their eyes meet for the first time...

NOTE: so, it was brought to my attention that the lemon in this was...lacking a very vital part. I had forgotten about that and felt like a complete idiot when I got the comment. I'm REALLY sorry! I had written this fic a long time ago, just as I was starting out writing yaoi and while that is never an excuse, I am re-posting the edited version. *hangs head in shame* Thank you to the two people who kindly informed me of what was missing and I promise...NEVER to forget the lube again!! (I hope this version works better ^_^;) If this is not okay, mods, please feel free to deleate this entry. I just wanted to give those of you who already read this a chance to read it the RIGHT way...

edited version of part 2
Current Location: kitchen
Current Mood: guiltyguilty
Current Music: Glee!!
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nimrodel_13nimrodel_13 on October 27th, 2010 10:56 pm (UTC)
*blushes* well, when you're right, you're right and they were very VERY right. I just hope I managed to make it better and didn't end up with an even bigger fail. Thanks, though, I really appreciate it. <3<3

Btw, I nearly fell off my chair when I saw your icon. It is EPIC!
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