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09 January 2004 @ 10:13 pm
Fic: Circumstances (Roy/Ed)  
I do not normally share out blame for my stories, but I swear I would not have written this one all on my own. Thus a portion of the blame and/or credit must go to all those who asked for another FMA lemon after the first one. *tips hat*

So, here's FMA Lemon No. 2. It isn't nearly as tight as the first one, and a whole lot sillier. I was thinking about the circumstances under which Ed and Roy might actually be induced into bed, and about whether the manga characterizations would be easier to work with, and got to thinking about the self-referentiality of nearly all manga where the characters know they're in a story, and I wound up with this. Thoughts on the conventions of doujinshi came in there too, somewhere.

Silliness, lemon (Roy/Ed), a touch of meta, NC-17, no spoilers.

thegreatpeanuterpeanutbaby13 on January 9th, 2004 07:36 pm (UTC)
*falls on the floor laughing*
once again the hawk commentary makes its appearance...
pretty much the nostalgia chick: lost edvikki on January 9th, 2004 07:53 pm (UTC)
Ed looked at the wall.

"Could be worse."

*coughs* Maybe I'm being to egocentric, or maybe I'm reading too much into this, but ... maybe Ed was less than pleased with my fic? >__> <__< ... anyway. Interesting bit of smut, that ... *laughs* I like the idea of them not having any clue how they get from one place to another, and I really liked the beginning, with them arguing over the circumstances. It was fun and funny. *hugs*
Branchbranchandroot on January 9th, 2004 08:06 pm (UTC)
*hugs back*

maybe Ed was less than pleased with my fic?

Didn't mention it to me if he was ^_-. I wrote the epilogue a couple days ago, actually. The wall was just a handy place to look so he didn't have to look at Roy.

pretty much the nostalgia chickvikki on January 9th, 2004 08:12 pm (UTC)
Well, there's always that, too. XD XD Well, again, nice job! *snerk*
kind of a dick, if that's what elusive meansprovetheworst on January 9th, 2004 10:00 pm (UTC)
tapw94tyw469 lmfao what the hell XDDDD I ♥ you XDD
jadecaptain on January 9th, 2004 10:55 pm (UTC)
That may have been silly at points, but still damn hot. *fans face* Wooo, I love this couple way too much to be normal. *grin* Keep up the great work though!
Ru: love and loved!1954 on January 9th, 2004 11:05 pm (UTC)
"I have better things to worry about," he declared.
"Such as?"
"Where are our clothes?"

I have died laughing. Please identify me at the local morgue.
Toranekodarkyo on January 10th, 2004 12:03 am (UTC)
Lovely. *smack* Should have more writers like you around here. >D
emiemigiri on January 10th, 2004 02:00 am (UTC)
-cling- i luff j00. -elopes-
and my name's emily too. XD w00t.
Branch: thumbs upbranchandroot on January 10th, 2004 09:30 am (UTC)
*high five*

Emilys rule!
breakin' through the door: Come Again?miss_arel on May 8th, 2004 02:21 am (UTC)

*Sigh* You're so GOOD. The way you characterize and the way you write, you just nailed the characters. (No pun intended.) And to put it bluntly, I'm all horny now . . . ^_^;

I dunno though . . . I've actually thought about what the character's animals are, and Ed seems more like jay than a hawk. Scruffy, tough, short-tempered; not as graceful or as collected as a hawk, but more fiesty and serious than a songbird like Al. (Don't mind me . . . I actually believe in totem animals, so i give this topic probably more thought than it deserves.) Oh, and Roy's a lizard. No doubting that.

Anywway, I LOVE this and all your other writings. Please do keep it up!
lapsus: deus ex machinalapsusxlinguae on January 7th, 2006 06:50 am (UTC)
wonderful loveliness.

Ed snorted.

"I have better things to worry about," he declared.

"Such as?"

"Where are our clothes?"

that was the funniest part of the whole thing! i love how they went from the office to the bedroom to the hotsprings. hehehe much love for this!