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13 August 2008 @ 09:59 pm
Fluff fic, first post.  
Hey :) Newbie here. I come bearing fluff.

Fandom: FMA
Rating: PG? *shrugs*
Theme: Somewhat of Papa!Roy, general Elric angst/comedy/fluff/whatnot.
Summary: Part of a prompt table, # 70: Storm.

http://disette.livejournal.com/4394.html#cutid1

Concrit welcomed. Be gentle.
 
 
Current Mood: amusedamused
 
 
sevlow: roy signsevlow on August 14th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
I give this story a big, huge, giant "AWWWWWWWWW!"

That was freakin' cute. Good god, poor Roy... left with a bundle of hyped-up four-year-old.

The line "Gracia will be there to shield you from some of the crazy" cracked me up.

I hope to see more from you in this community. Welcome!
disette on August 14th, 2008 07:51 pm (UTC)
XD thanks!
Annastomosistiaordona on August 15th, 2008 08:38 pm (UTC)
Awwww! This was so adorable! I'm always a sucker for papa! Roy. Please write more...we need more! NEED IT! XD
disette on August 15th, 2008 09:33 pm (UTC)
Yes! Papa!Roy is made of win. X)
Thanks!
dreamer1789: equivalent_exchangedreamer1789 on August 18th, 2008 08:41 pm (UTC)
I adore Fullmetal!family fics like this one. It's made of cute.

On the constructive side (not that I'm one to judge, so please don't take it to heart): Roy's phone call to Ed felt a bit overdramatic, but then this is also labelled as humour so you can get away with it. Also, I can't imagine Gracia (or even Hughes) starting a nut-food-fight at a chic restaurant when somber.

Overall it's enjoyable and sweet, and I really like the nickname Sparky. ^^
disette on August 28th, 2008 02:39 am (UTC)
Erm... Now that I look back at it, the phone call is a bit overdramatic. XD Edited.

They may or may not have been sober. XD Well, one at least.

Thanks! I've seen 'Sparky' used in some other fics, I couldn't resist. :)