fractured_chaos (fractured_chaos) wrote in fm_alchemist,

Looking for Critique

Hey y'all! I know I haven't been around much lately, and I haven't posted any AMVs in forever.

I'm looking for critique for a WiP.

MAJOR SPOILERS from Ep 25 from the beginning -- and there will be more as the AMV progresses for end of series (possibly even the movie).

If you're familiar with the anime, then you'll know which clips I 'created'. If you're not, it might just confuse you, because there is a lot of stuff in this that wasn't in the anime.

I'm looking for critique on the music, fades, effects and timing. This is low res WMV so it might be fuzzy. However many of the blur fx are mine.

The AMV was inspired by the song 'Brothers in Arms' and was cemented in my brain when I read a poem a friend had written. The poem was about a dog, but it sure seemed to fit the relationship between Hughes and Mustang, IMO. And I'd always believed that Maes would keep an eye on Roy no matter what happened.

Music: Koukai - FMA OST
Brothers in Arms - Dire Straits
Programs: Ulead VideoStudio 10 Plus
Ulead PhotoImpact 11
Poem: Ebene's Song - Lenna S Hanna-O'Neil (Used with permission)

NOTE: For some reason, YouTube is making the video run very choppy, which it doesn't do on my computer.

I Still Watch Over You - Fullmetal Alchemist - Incomplete
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