Excellent start. I can't wait to see how it progresses...

And I'm just dying to know what this "horrifying truth" is! *wiggles in anticipation*

Uh oh! Now I'm hoping that it's as horrifying to you as it is to me! :-)

But I'm thrilled as always that you like it so far.

Beautiful so far. ^^ I really like how Roy and Alphonse are working towards becoming a family. The bits of Ed monologue thrown in there are a brilliant move. ;)

Thank you! I've never really explored this sort of situation before, though I've always been fascinated by what it must have been like for Al, getting his body back and suddenly having all those sensations flood in. So although that's not the main idea of the story, I'm thinking it will continue to be a big part of it.

I'll try to keep moving on the rest and post the other chapters relatively quickly.

The "Ed bits" are actually crucial to the whole story. So they're there as a necessity as well as Roy's internal commentary.

Oh! You evil, evil woman! I got up because I was hungry, and decided to surf while eating some left-overs... and find THIS!

You -DO- realize that I'm going to cuss you in my sleep again.

I'll never live it down here! XD


*coughsgoddamnkashicatcoughsnifflesobs*

And you know I live for precisely this sort of response! ;-P