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28 April 2008 @ 08:36 pm
The Unweaving - Chapter 1 of 4?  
Author: kashicat

Fandom: FMA, but sort-of AU-ish

Title: The Unweaving

Chapter: 1 of probably 4

Rating: T (on Fanfiction.net); possibly lower

Summary: Alphonse Elric has finally regained his body, but now both he and Roy Mustang have to deal with life without Ed, as Mustang gradually uncovers a horrifying truth.

Chapter 1 at Fanfiction.net
 
 
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sevlow: roy signsevlow on April 29th, 2008 04:19 am (UTC)
Excellent start. I can't wait to see how it progresses...

And I'm just dying to know what this "horrifying truth" is! *wiggles in anticipation*

kashicatkashicat on April 29th, 2008 11:34 pm (UTC)
Uh oh! Now I'm hoping that it's as horrifying to you as it is to me! :-)

But I'm thrilled as always that you like it so far.
dreamer1789: royaidreamer1789 on April 29th, 2008 12:00 pm (UTC)
Beautiful so far. ^^ I really like how Roy and Alphonse are working towards becoming a family. The bits of Ed monologue thrown in there are a brilliant move. ;)
kashicatkashicat on April 29th, 2008 11:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I've never really explored this sort of situation before, though I've always been fascinated by what it must have been like for Al, getting his body back and suddenly having all those sensations flood in. So although that's not the main idea of the story, I'm thinking it will continue to be a big part of it.

I'll try to keep moving on the rest and post the other chapters relatively quickly.

The "Ed bits" are actually crucial to the whole story. So they're there as a necessity as well as Roy's internal commentary.
fractured_chaosfractured_chaos on April 29th, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
Oh! You evil, evil woman! I got up because I was hungry, and decided to surf while eating some left-overs... and find THIS!

You -DO- realize that I'm going to cuss you in my sleep again.

I'll never live it down here! XD


*coughsgoddamnkashicatcoughsnifflesobs*
kashicatkashicat on April 29th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
And you know I live for precisely this sort of response! ;-P