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jalendavi_lady: FMA - Izumi on the nature of life and dejalendavi_lady on April 21st, 2007 04:45 am (UTC)
Commenting here because I don't feel much like dusting off my ff.net login right now.

Just read through all the chapters in one sitting. Lovely, and awful but in the way that a Mustang-dealing-with-his-traumas fic can be awful. As in, you describe things to the point of sympathetic ouchies, not that your style is awful. (And speaking of ouchies? Chapter 3... a bit of a higher rating might be in order, hmm? More than a bit heavy on the ouchies description for PG-13.)

Do I detect that not telling Pinako the whole truth is going to bite Edward and everyone else on the backside soon?
kashicatkashicat on April 21st, 2007 08:01 pm (UTC)
This whole story is absolutely stunning. One of the best post-Ishbal-Roy-angst stories I've ever read, and very very plausible. Thanks so much for this!