Sushi Freak (seaweedotter) wrote in fm_alchemist,
Sushi Freak

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Story- redux

I wrote (or began to write) my first even fan-fic, and posted the bare bones of it here before. Then I decided that I wanted to expand each little section and make them whole chapters, so this is the first chaper of my first fan-fic.

Bear with me, because this doesnt even have a beta yet, I just wanted to put it out and get some ideas on what you guys thought or some constructive critisisms.. I know there are probably some grammar/spelling and run on sentence issues. I apologize. :)

Title: After the Fall, Chapter 1

Author: SeaweedOtter

Beta: none, yet.

Characters: Roy x Ed (and a tiny bit of Hawkeye emo)

Rating: R to NC-17 overall for language and nudity, PG-13 this chapter, for some Hawkeye dreaming.

Warnings: The story changes the continuity just a little bit from when it takes place at the end of episode 25 in the TV series. It takes place after Hughes' death but before Ed, Al, and Winry take the train to Rush Valley.

Summary: After the funeral for Maes Hughes, Roy was feeling rather... vulnerable.

Copyrights: The characters obviously belong to thier creators, not me.

The sky had been gray and cloudy that day. Big, black clouds, heavy with moisture, ready to burst for with thier precious liquid."
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