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09 December 2006 @ 02:03 pm
My first ever Fan fic.. and my first ever FMA fanfic too!!  
This is the first part of the story.. there is no naughty parts in this one, but I just wanted to post this part even before I finished the whole thing because I want to see what people think so far.. so please give me some constructive critism here !!

Title: After the Fall
Author: Seaweedotter
Characters: Roy x Ed (and a tiny bit of Hawkeye emo)
Rating: R to NC-17 (overall for language and nudity) but PG rating for
this section for language.
Warnings/Disclaimers: The story may change the continuity from the end
of episode 25 in the TV series just a tiny bit, it takes place after
Hughes' death but before Ed, Al, and Winry take the train to Rush Valley
Also please bear with me, this is my first attempt at FMA fanfic, or *ANY*
fanfic at all.
The characters obviously belong to thier creators, not me.

Read more..
Current Mood: nervousnervous
the power of organic magic flows: Umeda studyingepistretes on December 10th, 2006 05:28 am (UTC)
I am making a comment about a fic, not writing one so it matters not if my own grammar is a little off, I also did not spot my typo, but oh well.

Fiction may allow for deviations in the name of style, but it is these deviations taken to extremes that is changing the language.

It needs to be pointed out when someone is looking for constructive criticism and any beta would have picked up on that.