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FMA fic - Invidia "Penitence" (5b/6)

Title: Penitence.
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist.
Characters: Mostly Envy-Centric.
Series: Invidia.
Chronological Order: Third.
Spoilers: For all the anime, although this piece diverges from the series around the start of episode 32, with little side details.
Beta: DramaQueen, Dynast and istele
Rating: R, for violence (Envy), swearing (Ed).
Genre: Drama
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Scar/Al, though nothing concrete.
Feedback: Please! If you spot typos, grammar, continuity (but bear in mind this is an AU fic), do tell me. I tend to write late at night and although my beta's are skilled, they can't always catch all my slips.
Quote: “The passion of hatred is so long lived and so obstinate a malady that the surest sign of death in a sick person is their desire for reconciliation.” ~Ernest Hemingway.
Word Count: +/- 6 917, on this installment, over all, +/- 50 000 65 000.
Notes: This installment was hard to post. I like the events unfolding here, since they are the start of the climax of the story, but I find my wording a bit too... sloppy. Concrit is especially welcome right now, as I'd love to hear what  you think would make this feel better. ...am I the only one crying out with glee at the notion there's only one more Installment and this thing will be over? XD

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