Rieka De-Volka (ranty_rie) wrote in fm_alchemist,
Rieka De-Volka

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FMA fic - Invidia "Penitence" (5a/6)

Title: Penitence.
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist.
Characters: Mostly Envy-Centric.
Series: Invidia.
Chronological Order: Third.
Spoilers: For all the anime, although this piece diverges from the series around the start of episode 32, with little side details.
Beta: DramaQueen, Dynast and istele
Rating: R, for violence (Envy), swearing (Ed).
Genre: Drama
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Scar/Al, though nothing concrete.
Feedback: Please! If you spot typos, grammar, continuity (but bear in mind this is an AU fic), do tell me. I tend to write late at night and although my beta's are skilled, they can't always catch all my slips.
Quote: “The passion of hatred is so long lived and so obstinate a malady that the surest sign of death in a sick person is their desire for reconciliation.” ~Ernest Hemingway.
Word Count: +/- 7 625, on this installment, over all, +/- 50 000 65 000.
Notes: Well, sorry for the delay, my computer, or more accurately, one of my hard drives was killed, and Invidia went down with it. I could rescue some of it, but Penitence - at least the parts that were missing - had to be rewritten. And of course, what does this fic do? It spawns. It's now overly sixty five thousand words and it's frankly scaring me. I broke this installment in two, the next one should be up by the weekend. I hope. Now, well, enjoy the ride, ok?

Go to "Sinner."
Go to "Judgment."
Go to Penitence (1/6)
Go to Penitence (2/6)
Go to Penitence (3/6)
Go to Penitence (4/6)

( “Your problem, pipsqueak,” The Homunculus said almost conversationally, hands turned into claws and slashing through the lines of monsters with a disturbing ease, “Is that you don’t know how to kill things. See?” He tore a throat open, growing more and more satisfied with each victim, “Corpses are pretty darn harmless.” )

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