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13 October 2006 @ 02:21 am
Pilfering Parables [Jing & FMA crossover]  
Title: Pilfering Parables
Authors: lavaliere and ankhutenshi
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist & King of Bandits Jing
Genre: Humor, Mystery, Adventure, General
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Takes place between episodes 42 and 43.
Summary: The Bandit King, Jing, wants to get his hands on the famous Philosopher's Stone, and he thought it'd be easy... but he'd never thought he'd have to contend with the Stone's older brother.

Part 1: In which Ed and Al meet a stray albatross and the bird's pet, Jing.

Part 2: In which Jing finds that he won't be able to fit the Philosopher's Stone in his pocket, like he had hoped.
Current Mood: excitedexcited
Current Music: Rooftops ~ Lost Prophets
Red Themister: Oh bloody hell...redthemister on October 13th, 2006 08:01 am (UTC)

*reads, will comment later*
Red Themisterredthemister on October 13th, 2006 09:12 am (UTC)
Very nice! Both Jing and Ed were in character. I have some trouble seeing Kir warm up to someone that quickly, if at all (I'd expect Kir and Ed to be fighting more than Jing and Ed), but Alphonse seems to have that "everyone likes me" air about him, so who knows? ^-^

☇ ⁕ ☆ ᴀᴘᴘᴙιᴠᴏιsᴇ ∽ нᴀʏʟᴇʏ ∿ 。lavaliere on October 13th, 2006 01:37 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I meant to have Ed be hostile to both Kir and Jing, but Kir was trying to be secretive and get info out of the Elrics. Thus the significant lack of fighting between Ed and Kir. Though, if you did notice, many of the large fights between the two groups were provoked by Kir. Especially the moments like when Ed trapped Kir in a cage, which Jing soon destroyed and glared at Ed. :)

Alphonse certianly does have that air, doesn't he? Hell, he even gets Scar to like him, and Scar hates everyone. XD
ankhutenshi on October 13th, 2006 03:01 pm (UTC)
♥ Seeing your reaction to our fic totally made my morning. ^_^

RE: Kir being friendly. As itoko said above, Kir was the double-agent this time, rather than Jing. Also, he sort of feels a bit of companionship with Al, 'cause if the talking bird and the talking armor can't find something in common... LOL!

Sorry for the multi-postings of this comment, I'm still asleep and can't figure out which Reply button goes where...