Rieka De-Volka (ranty_rie) wrote in fm_alchemist,
Rieka De-Volka

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[Fanfic] Invidia: Judgment (1/1)

Title: Judgment.
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist.
Characters: Mostly Envy-Centric.
Series: Invidia.
Chronological Order: Second.
Spoilers: For all the anime, this particular piece takes place before and through the first episodes of the anime series.
Beta: DramaQueen, Dynast and istele.
Rating: R, for violence, swearing and sexual situations.
Genre: Drama, Angst, Romance.
Pairings: Envy/Lust.
Feedback: Please! If you spot typos, grammar, continuity (but bear in mind this is an AU fic), do tell me. I tend to write late at night and although my beta's are skilled, they can't always catch all my slips.
Quote: "Judgment for an evil thing is many times delayed some day or two, some century or two, but it is as sure as life, it is as sure as death." ~Thomas Carlyle.
Word Count: +/- 5 700.
Notes: A small interlude, between “Sinner” and “Penitence”. Originally, I didn’t want to write this part, not so much because of the pairing (which is not the ‘rare pairing’ from the challenge, but a secret sinful pleasure of mine), but because I had wanted to leave it floating around, just hint at it in “Penitence”. However, after writing for six hours straight, I went back, read it and cringed so hard I realized it would fuck up the story horribly to add flashbacks like that. So, here’s hoping you like it. As DramaQueen dubbed this, “So, that’s why Envy started war with Dante.” 

When she pressed her lips to his, he welcomed her. He pressed back and let his tongue out to taste decay, to taste the ashen softness of a willing mouth that left a bitter aftertaste of lies in his own.  )
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