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01 August 2006 @ 04:49 pm
[Fanfic] Invidia: Penitence (1/6)  
Title: Penitence.
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist.
Characters: Mostly Envy-Centric.
Series: Invidia.
Chronological Order: Third.
Spoilers: For all the anime, although this piece diverges from the series around the start of episode 32, with little side details.
Beta: DramaQueen, Dynast and istele.
Rating: R, for violence (Envy), swearing (Ed).
Genre: Drama
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Scar/Al, though nothing concrete.
Feedback: Please! If you spot typos, grammar, continuity (but bear in mind this is an AU fic), do tell me. I tend to write late at night and although my beta's are skilled, they can't always catch all my slips.
Quote: “The passion of hatred is so long lived and so obstinate a malady that the surest sign of death in a sick person is their desire for reconciliation.” ~Jean de la Bruyere.
Word Count: +/- 9 150, on this installment, over all, +/- 50 000.
Notes: This was originally the first story I wrote for the series, but I got side tracked with the background until I decided to make that into a different story. This one is… well, it’s rather scary on size, so following one of my beta’s advice, I decided to post it on parts, so your brain doesn’t melt halfway through it XD Dearly hope you like it, the Roy/Ed in this story is dedicated to jadedsilk, who’s the best thing since chocolate ;) There’s a little interlude between Sinner and Penitence, I’ll post it later this month. You don't have to, but it'd make much more sense if you read Sinner first.

( Al wanted to ask, wanted to know so badly what his brother had offered, but something told him it was not the right time to ask. Instead, he watched the handshake, tight and painful, and wondered if it was wise to make a deal with the devil. )
 
 
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