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23 April 2006 @ 11:16 am
Amber Haze (Fullmetal Alchemist, Roy/Ed, #30-Kiss)  
Title: Amber Haze
Author: hotarukat
Pairing: Roy Mustang and Edward Elric
Disclaimer: I don't own FMA. If I did the anime would end very differently.
Notes: Ed thinks he will do a quick favor for Hawkeye on the anniversary of Hughes’s death, but things with the Colonel inevitably get more complicated when alcohol is involved. This story grew out of a fanart from a while ago. And, hopefully the link to the story will work this time...

You're too young to be drinking, Fullmetal.


crossposted to 30_kisses, fm_alchemist, fma_yaoi
 
 
 
lilang_luha: Thinking Hard by lilang_luhalilang_luha on April 24th, 2006 02:12 am (UTC)
wow! Great story. I really love the interaction between Roy and Edward because it's very IC, and I can actually see it happening in the anime/manga. The play between the dialogues and the actions are priceless. I also like the kiss at the very end... soft, sweet, and not over-the-top :-3 But I think what I loved the most is the slightly tipsy Edward who fell on the curb at the worst possible moment. Incredibly cute (it made me want to pinch the boy on the cheek)!!!!

I like how this fic was written and look forward to more chatpers (if you do plan on continuing that is...).
Follow_the_lighthotarukat on April 24th, 2006 02:28 am (UTC)
Oh wow, thank you so much!! It really makes me so happy to see reviews like this! I'm going to try really hard to continue at least another date, but it's hard because I'm used to writing/reading a bunch of chapters with slight flirting and *then* the payoff of them getting together. But the feedback has been so great!! thank you again!
lilang_luhalilang_luha on April 25th, 2006 12:13 am (UTC)
No problem! I try my best to give well-thought reviews (though often it takes me a while to get there because I read multiple times and sometimes there just isnt much to say lol), because I know I appreciate them when I get long reviews for my fics ^_^. I really do hope you continue. I like the flirting and tension, then *bam* getting together more than just plain smex. So this is my kind of fic. Anyways, happy writing!
lilang_luhalilang_luha on April 25th, 2006 12:15 am (UTC)
Forgot to ask
Since this is on FFNet, will you still be posting on LJ if you do continue? (Can't figure out the story alert list on FF w/o having to review.)
Follow_the_lighthotarukat on April 25th, 2006 12:29 am (UTC)
Re: Forgot to ask
Oh I'll definately post on lj when I continue (I like to try and pimp my work as much as possible.) It'll probably be a week or two though. Keep an eye out!