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18 April 2006 @ 10:34 pm
An opinion please! =3  
Hi everyone!!!
I just made a pic for mi sister, but I'm not sure if it's ok... normally I only notice mistakes once I've already colored the thing and can't fix it anymore =(
Since this one is a present I really want it to look great, so please, if you have a minute, comments are really apreciated!! ♥

A link to my DA

Thanks in advance!! :3

X-posted around... sorry to spam your friendlists, I really need to color this now ;___;
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「 JL 」: FMA_Ed_Aljlarinda on April 19th, 2006 02:46 am (UTC)
Hm, let's see...Their faces are ok... The main problem is the size of their heads, they're too big for their bodies (even with manga style).
Also, Al's shoulders look different, and since it's a front shot they should look the same (look at the distance from neck to the farthest part of the shoulders). The hands and arms look ok. I would suggest making their necks a bit longer...

And that should do it. :D
Lira Alicia Kraunikliralicia on April 19th, 2006 02:51 am (UTC)
Yeah, I tend to make bigs head lately, dunno why... probably too much time drawing chibis xp
Thanks so much, I'll go check what you say =D ♥