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18 April 2006 @ 10:34 pm
An opinion please! =3  
Hi everyone!!!
I just made a pic for mi sister, but I'm not sure if it's ok... normally I only notice mistakes once I've already colored the thing and can't fix it anymore =(
Since this one is a present I really want it to look great, so please, if you have a minute, comments are really apreciated!! ♥

A link to my DA

Thanks in advance!! :3

X-posted around... sorry to spam your friendlists, I really need to color this now ;___;
Current Mood: boredbored
rabu-hime~ ♥: RoyEd~ I love you!! ♥♥♥yohietastic on April 19th, 2006 02:39 am (UTC)
Dx You're so talented! I love your work! ♥

...And what is it exactly that Edward's "working on"? xD; It.. looks like tic-tac-toe.
Lira Alicia Kraunik: Elrics: Mine mine!liralicia on April 19th, 2006 02:42 am (UTC)
Thanks!!! x3
Actually... he's going to be SERIOUSLY working on something... will probably paint some random alchemy stuff on the papers, I was just messing around with the scrap ^^;
「 JL 」: FMA_Ed_Aljlarinda on April 19th, 2006 02:46 am (UTC)
Hm, let's see...Their faces are ok... The main problem is the size of their heads, they're too big for their bodies (even with manga style).
Also, Al's shoulders look different, and since it's a front shot they should look the same (look at the distance from neck to the farthest part of the shoulders). The hands and arms look ok. I would suggest making their necks a bit longer...

And that should do it. :D
Lira Alicia Kraunikliralicia on April 19th, 2006 02:51 am (UTC)
Yeah, I tend to make bigs head lately, dunno why... probably too much time drawing chibis xp
Thanks so much, I'll go check what you say =D ♥
fullmalkie on April 19th, 2006 02:57 am (UTC)
Oh, this is way cute =D Your hands are wonderful. The only thing that struck me wrong was Ed's right arm- it might need to bend differently, or maybe you could move his elbow in a little.
But, otherwise, I love it. I can't wait to see it colored!
Lira Alicia Kraunik: Elrics: chibis in blueliralicia on April 19th, 2006 03:02 am (UTC)
Mmm, ok, must check on that too =O *is taking notes*
If I don't mess it too much with the coloring (It usually happens TwT) I'll post it when it's done
Thanks for your help!! >w< ♥
fullmalkie on April 19th, 2006 04:03 am (UTC)
You're very welcome <3 Good luck on the picture.
And much icon love =D
Lira Alicia Kraunik: Chibi Envy: TOO cute!!liralicia on April 19th, 2006 04:05 am (UTC)
sky_dark's icons are lovely x3 *is a fan*
Kleptollamacorellianrogue on April 19th, 2006 03:08 am (UTC)
Adorable, really. Only things I saw are mostly nit-picky. Al's pointer finger on his right hand is at an odd angle and looks broken. The other may just be stylistic, but Ed's only wearing one glove, the right. Other than that, I like the pic. Specially the kitty!
Lira Alicia Kraunikliralicia on April 19th, 2006 03:13 am (UTC)
The glove is on purpose... a pun for my sis who's always complaining on how she can't write with her gloves on in winter =P
Will check the finger... I always tend to make too curly hands ^^;
__ame__ on April 19th, 2006 03:23 am (UTC)
I love it! Now, I'm not one for text on art (unless it's a doujin), so except for the text (that's just my opinion though), it's lovely X3!
Lira Alicia Kraunik: Chibi Aru: *sweatdrop*liralicia on April 19th, 2006 03:25 am (UTC)
The text it's just me randommly spamming my own scraps, it's not supposed to go there =3
Thanks!!! ♥
umi_mikazukiumi_mikazuki on April 19th, 2006 04:21 am (UTC)
I'm stalking watching you now. :D
pimpmaster Vorigamistar on April 19th, 2006 04:38 am (UTC)
absolutly adorable
Miss Helen: Big Wrenchmtglass54 on April 19th, 2006 04:38 am (UTC)
I like the picture. Very cute. Glad to know purple text not part of the pic. If it was the "know" should be "now".

Miss Helenaka Caitlin's Mom
Keita Yuki~♥ Musings of one from k'sheyna vale.♥ ~: FMA brotherskeita_yuki on April 19th, 2006 05:39 am (UTC)
only thing I could see that was off was AL's right hand (which for our view is the lower one thats drawn left.) the fingers look weird. Other then that its AWSOME cant wait to see it colored.
chrstphrlchrstphrl on April 19th, 2006 06:29 am (UTC)
Awww. This is so pretty.
goddess_emilygoddess_emily on April 19th, 2006 06:49 pm (UTC)
Awww..that is so adorable. I love it! I love your style of drawing. I really like your icon also. It is so cute.