c_b_syndrome (c_b_syndrome) wrote in fm_alchemist,

Balance of Power ~ Chapter Four

*Title: Chapter Four: Rubber Ducks Anonymous
*Author: c_b_s aka: "Crackbunny Syndrome"
Genre: Humor, drama, angst, conspiracy, action, resurrection of the dead... probably just about everything. Somewhere in all that is a real plot.
*Rating: R (mostly for language and violence, but mostly language)
*Level of critique sought: Detailed. No flames, but honest critique is encouraged. We can take it!

Teaser: "Game?" he growled as his momentary guilt flew off into the ether. "You people are playing... games? What about Al?" Ed waved a hand; gesturing to the outside. "He could be somewhere hurt... he could be-" he choked and felt an icy grip around his heart. "-dying."

The first ten chapters are posted here. Others are going up as we code them.

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