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12 March 2006 @ 09:47 pm
Winry Ficlet  
Please Read & Review!

Title: Waiting
Author: Ikuyona
Rating: PG
Words: 151
Disclaimers: Fullmetal Alchemist belongs to Hiromu Arakawa, not me.
Comments: This is the ultimate Winry angst, in my opinion. Thanks for the beta-read, okotachi!

The sun was setting on a beautiful Fall day in Resembool. Crisp air swirled all around the tiny town and its many rolling hills, occasionally carrying a few decaying leaves along with it, giving them the illusion of temporary life as they danced toward the ground for the first and final time.

At the top of one of the highest hills sat a lonely looking girl. She hugged her knees to her chest to keep warm, and she wore a far-off gaze in her puffy eyes.

"This isn't fair at all, you two." Winry spoke weakly after hours of silence. "You always keep me waiting."

After a moment of pausing for a response that would never come, Winry shuddered and hid her face behind her folded arms. Muffled sobs echoed softly down and across the rolling hills of Resembool as the last few rays of sunshine illuminated the carved lettering on two newly-made gravestones.

x-posted to my journal and hagaren_manga
Barking at the wind: riza cry by evil_little_dogevil_little_dog on March 13th, 2006 03:56 am (UTC)

Very angsty indeed. Love the imagery.
ikuyona on March 13th, 2006 04:43 am (UTC)
*pats back sympathetically*

I'm glad to hear it. Thanks! ^^
Hannahhitokiri_black on March 13th, 2006 06:14 am (UTC)
-snuffles- Poor girl.

I espically love the first paragraph. Geart job with the Winry angst.
ikuyona on March 13th, 2006 04:34 pm (UTC)
Yes, poor girl indeed. Waiting is hard.

Thanks! ^^
Hannahhitokiri_black on March 13th, 2006 04:52 pm (UTC)
....-re-reads comment-... o.o I need to learn how to spell. :P *Great *Especially

Yes waiting is hard.
ikuyona on March 13th, 2006 06:22 pm (UTC)
Hah! I didn't even notice that! XD
Mizuki Ashiya & Anne Marlow: kiss meanne_marlow on March 13th, 2006 03:27 pm (UTC)
wow....I could imagine winry acting in such dispare. then again it wouldn't be the first time would it?
ikuyona on March 13th, 2006 04:38 pm (UTC)
That's great you could imagine it! And no, it sure wouldn't be the first time.
Ami: tincan!Al = love (Made by silverwind13)threeonetwo on March 13th, 2006 10:51 pm (UTC)
...-cue crying- Makes me wonder what happened to them. Very sad, you did a wonderful job writing this.
ikuyona on March 14th, 2006 02:38 am (UTC)
It's a shame you'll never know. ;) Thanks! ^^
moon_wingmoon_wing on March 13th, 2006 11:37 pm (UTC)
Ga... Da.. da... damn.
ikuyona on March 25th, 2006 06:46 pm (UTC)
I'm not sure what to make of that. Heh. (Icon love!)
moon_wingmoon_wing on March 26th, 2006 07:16 pm (UTC)
You did so well I wasn't coherent enough to give it a comment. It's a good thing. And thank you!