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09 March 2006 @ 04:26 pm
Poetry Time :D  


Hope you enjoy this. I really hate the style it's in, but this was a classwork assignment to write a villanelle. >3<


An Alchemist's Lament

By strawbryshuichi and a classmate (can't give her name out)

Sweet rain pours down upon an anxious fool
As I look back upon the days gone by
White, silk fabric sparks the passion of a cold, yet hot, tool

Vermilion shadows wade through a pitch black pool
As tears streak down pale cheeks, I sigh
Sweet rain pours down upon an anxious fool

Foot steps quiver in the night, so cool
The bullets, free, seem to ,almost, fly
White, silk fabric sparks the passion of a cold, yet hot, tool

I sit sat, trapped, as if in school
The urgent massages pile to the sky
Sweet rain pours down upon an anxious fool

Beside me, an empty stool
A friend's gloomy phantom's cry
White, silk fabric sparks the passion of a cold, yet hot, tool

My heart is split, an internal duel
Shall I live, or shall I die?
Sweet rain pours down upon an anxious fool
White, silk fabric sparks the passion of a cold, yet hot, tool
 
 
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hagane_no_tofu on March 9th, 2006 11:40 pm (UTC)
Ooh, this is really good :3 ::missed the chance to comment in the chat::