Kali or Edismine (edismine) wrote in fm_alchemist,
Kali or Edismine
edismine
fm_alchemist

Hi everyone. I am in need of some fanfiction help. I need someone to help me write a Edward-Roy fanfiction. I need help with writing and spelling/grammer.
Yaoi warning.


Fullmetal Alchemist
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Summary: [yaoi/shonen ai] Edward is 19 and Alphonse is 18.



“Nii san!” yelled Alphonse as he ran after his brother.

“Alphonse you’re so slow!” said Edward “Come on Roy is waiting for us.”

“Humph, Nii-san you’re so mean.”

“Oh, come on you have to be faster now that you have your body back.”

“I am! But you’re too fast!” Alphonse said, complaining in a whiny voice.

“Oh come on! I’m not that fast!”

“I would think that you are, judging by you height.” Said a voice from behind them

“AHHH!!! WHO YA CALL’N SO SMALL, ONE DAY A TINY RED ANT ALMOST STEPPED ON ME, BUT INSTEAD TRIPPED OVER ME!” Yelled Edward, over reacting as usual

“Oh lighting up shrimp. I didn’t say that.”

“Humm….” Thought Ed as he turned around to see who it was, standing there about a couple feet taller than him was Brigadier Roy Mustang, The Flame Alchemist. Edward hated how Roy always teased him about his height and how his job is better than Ed’s. Even though Edward only joined the military to search for the philosopher stone. “Ya’ know Roy nobody asked you about my height!”

“Yeah, but we know you get so cute when you get mad.” Said Roy, pinching Edwards’s cheeks

“Ahhhhh! Roy you are making me so mad!” Yelled Ed, again this time clapping his hands together about to use alchemy, “Don’t make me do this! You know I will!”

“Oh come on you wouldn’t…you love me?!” said Roy, getting closer to Edward

“Get away from me! I don’t even like you! Why would I love you?!”

“Nii-San I think we should be leaving now…” said Alphonse in a quite voice, Alphonse was never the type to speak up, especially around his brother. He always had to break up fights that Edward got into. Ed got into fights all the time, for the stupidest reasons too. Mainly people calling him small.

“Okay, Al…Lets go.” Said Edward, a little disappointed

“Bye hunny bunny poo!” Said Roy in a sarcastic voice.

“Edward just ignore him.” Said Alphonse, putting his hand on Ed’s shoulders pushing him away from Roy.

“Ahhhhh! But he’s called me ‘hunny bunny poo!’ We can’t just let that pass!” Yelled Edward crying like a baby

“Oh come on Nii-San you’re suppose to be the older brother…not the younger!” Alphonse said pointing it out to Edward. He sometimes forgets that part.

“Fine…Let’s go Alphonse. I’ll act my own age.”

“Yeah, sweetie…Act your age not your height.” Yelled Roy, being sarcastic about the ‘sweetie’ part, knowing that it would get Ed mad




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