K (ashoka) wrote in fm_alchemist,
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FMA fic

Another fic, and I must warn you beforehand of the really, really bad usage of third person present. Eh heh. And a retarded plot, but--move along, you should be used to this by now.

Really no warnings--and no spoilers for recent episodes, just the flashback arc. Gen, Ed musing on Al. A very mild fic.

Meat Pie and Pastry

Constructive criticism would be really appreciated; this fic didn't turn out that great, and I would appreciate tips on how to make it better. *shrugs*
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