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27 November 2005 @ 08:01 pm
Fic-Drabble. Roy's Point of View  

Someone directed me to a generator that gave me the following:

I will write a fanfic or drabble with the pairing
and include the following things:
rain, pillow, cigarette

I don't think this qualifies as G, but it's as close to G as I have ever been. Think I managed the rest okay? Please note, this is my first time writing FMA, and it's my first drabble.

Pair: Roy and Envy
Rating: Yellow (Light Warning for homosexual implications. Nothing explicit.)
If you have NOT watched up to or beyond episode 25, this drabble contains a series Spoiler!!!!!!

It was a lie.

He knew it was a lie.

The man that walked into the bar could not look so much like Maes that it made his heart hurt. He didn't move like and sound so much like Maes that he thought he was going insane, that the funeral had been a horrid dream and he was just waking up. The smell of the man when he got close, when he asked Roy if he had a light for the cigarette dangling lazily from between his lips, was not so much like Maes that it brought back memories of shared nights and kisses stolen on duty.

They walked together silently in the rain, and Roy told himself that this man was not Maes, would never be Maes, and was, indeed, just another random body to keep his bed warm for another night. But the sight and smell and sound of the man were so disconcertingly, perfectly, exactly Maes that Roy wondered if he hadn't truly gone just a little mad.

Later, before Roy rolled over and began to dress, he let his fingers touch the dark hair, still slightly damp from the rain and their sweat, that rested thickly on the pillow. The man appeared to be asleep, but Roy knew better than most that appearances were nothing if not deceiving.

It was a lie. He knew that.

But for one moment, it had been the sweetest lie that he had ever been told.

x-posted to fma_yaoi
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Onyx Shinigami: Full Metal Alchemistonyx_shinigami on November 27th, 2005 11:37 am (UTC)
If I had saved the link, I would. Unfortunatly, I no longer hav it myself.

I'm glad you liked the fic. ^^
inane_nana on November 28th, 2005 05:28 am (UTC)
Kyaaaaaa!!!!!! That is the most horrible story I have ever read! Gaaaah!!! He Killed Hughes. He did. He KILLED Hughes. Roooooy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 You can't do that. NOoooooOOes! Rooooy, fry him now! Fry him I say!!!!!


that was absolutely abominable. In a delicious, heartwrenching, angsty and completely believable way that totally broke my heart.

I want to have your babies. And no, I'm not asking.
Onyx Shinigamionyx_shinigami on December 7th, 2005 02:35 pm (UTC)
Re: O_O
Best. Comment. Ever!!! XD!!!

That's the trechery of Envy. He can be so damn cruel and subtle. His mind-f*ckery is exquisite.
moon_wingmoon_wing on November 28th, 2005 06:35 pm (UTC)

Oh my... How dark. Nice.
Onyx Shinigamionyx_shinigami on November 29th, 2005 01:47 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it.

Dark? More angsty than dark IMO, but, well, to each their own interpretations. ^^

Thanks for commenting.