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15 November 2005 @ 02:14 pm
Tell me what ya think...  
okay for my interactive media class we have to do a cereal box and i'm doing Edo's...so here is what the box looks like and i need your opinion if you like it or not or if i should change anything...keep in mind i won't take all you opinions but i will apreciate any! thanks!




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Ed on his own...(i suck @ drawing on the computer.)

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The cereal box...


 
 
Vahn Malicevahnm on November 15th, 2005 07:36 pm (UTC)
I won't comment on the art, but can I ask what software you used to draw this?

Oh, if they're O's, shouldn't they have a hole in the middle? Just a thought.

Oh, and... "Miniature gram crackers with hunny flovoring... enlarged to show texture" should be changed more to... "Miniature gram crackers with honey flavoring. Enlarged to show texture."

Don't worry about sentence fragments, but worry about spelling and capitalization. It’s like an advertisement, right?

Oh, sorry if I sound abrupt and rude.
Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:31 pm (UTC)
i was thinking about doing the hole in the middle but now that you guys say stuff i think i will! and i used photoshop...our teacher won't let us use paint...

and don't worrie your not being rude... i really suck at spelling! plus i'm the one who asked for your advise! ^_^