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15 November 2005 @ 02:14 pm
Tell me what ya think...  
okay for my interactive media class we have to do a cereal box and i'm doing Edo's...so here is what the box looks like and i need your opinion if you like it or not or if i should change anything...keep in mind i won't take all you opinions but i will apreciate any! thanks!




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Ed on his own...(i suck @ drawing on the computer.)

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The cereal box...


 
 
 
solicities on November 15th, 2005 07:31 pm (UTC)
lol That's really cute.

In my Computer Graphics class we have to do the same thing and redesign a product. (Except I'm making Repenting Oo0o0o0oOoOOo's.) Basically Jesus Brand Cereal lol. Every bite protects you from the Plague...(or Kills a Sin...tee hee! XD) I traced a picture of the Pope in illustrator and colored it in.

Wowsers...I never thoght of using a FMA theme though! XDD

Vahn Malicevahnm on November 15th, 2005 07:36 pm (UTC)
I won't comment on the art, but can I ask what software you used to draw this?

Oh, if they're O's, shouldn't they have a hole in the middle? Just a thought.

Oh, and... "Miniature gram crackers with hunny flovoring... enlarged to show texture" should be changed more to... "Miniature gram crackers with honey flavoring. Enlarged to show texture."

Don't worry about sentence fragments, but worry about spelling and capitalization. It’s like an advertisement, right?

Oh, sorry if I sound abrupt and rude.
Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:31 pm (UTC)
i was thinking about doing the hole in the middle but now that you guys say stuff i think i will! and i used photoshop...our teacher won't let us use paint...

and don't worrie your not being rude... i really suck at spelling! plus i'm the one who asked for your advise! ^_^
yaminokurisu on November 15th, 2005 07:43 pm (UTC)
KAWAIIIIII
yaminokurisu on November 15th, 2005 07:45 pm (UTC)
Can I just add you shouldn't say miniature... Ed might kills you.XD
Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:31 pm (UTC)
good point!
yaminokurisu on November 16th, 2005 05:27 pm (UTC)
XD
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Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:33 pm (UTC)
sorry about it being big but we had to make it 8X10...not my fault...blame my teacher...
goddess_emilygoddess_emily on November 15th, 2005 08:10 pm (UTC)
Aww that is so cute. I like the way your drew him. I would eat those if they were real. I love it.
Megmegkips on November 15th, 2005 09:15 pm (UTC)
I found a few spelling errors.

The yellow text bubble should read "Ed O's! Miniature gram crackers with honey flavouring!" (Or flavoring, if you don't want a British spelling.)
Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:34 pm (UTC)
i know there spelling errors...i suck at spelling...thats why i asked for your guy's advise! thanks for telling me!
Kali or Edismineedismine on November 15th, 2005 09:35 pm (UTC)
thank you all for the advise!
Stephanie: chibi edanimethief92 on November 15th, 2005 10:31 pm (UTC)
Ed O's... I want some!

Hand them over NOW DAMNIT!
solicities on November 15th, 2005 11:23 pm (UTC)
Eeek! x_X; <--- Didn't know you wanted criticism.

The title text is great. The things that should be changed are the background colors. Make the colors compliment the graphics and stuff. ^__^ Also your Edo drawing is cute and since you're limited to only one program on the computer I agree and think you should find a picture from the internet and past it in. Or try drawing the picture and then scanning it, that's to only make the picture look neater.

Ah...I hope this helps!
Sailor Mac: Munich Ed -- by karasu_0sailormac on November 16th, 2005 02:26 am (UTC)
One more spelling correction -- it should be *graham* crackers.

But the box is very cute!