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27 February 2004 @ 03:17 pm
Drabble.  
First post here. Quick drabble after ep 20. Ep 20 spoilers beware

Untitled Edo Drabble

You wonder why you keep on going. You wonder why you love him. You want to know why you lie to him. You wonder why it's not ending. You wonder why things out this way, but you know already.

Because you were ignorant, he is gone. Because you didn't listen, he is gone. Because you cared for your mother more than you did his wellbeing, he is gone. you cannot bring him back.

They all told you this was going to happen. You didn't listen. They tried to stop you. You ran away, taking him with you, for two long years. Your teacher warned you what would happen. You left and did it anyways.

Now you are punished justly. You walk this path alone, even though he is with you. You walk this path to bring him back. It's an endless path that will go on forever, and you walk it anyways.

You wonder why.

fin.

Comments? Criticism?
 
 
Brenda: shockwave - flyingteapothikari_light on February 27th, 2004 06:31 pm (UTC)
this made me feel like crying, it was so sad but i assume you were looking to get that?
Rising Phoenixmystik_aurora on February 27th, 2004 06:53 pm (UTC)
it's a great teaser- it pulls at the heart strings especially after seeing the episode and having a gist of those feelings. I have to remind myself that it's just a cartoon-- an anime is something else if you have to remind yourself that it's just illustrations on paper or celluloid..