Waste Land [Chapter 12 (part 1)]Author:
Ed x Envy (in that order, yep)Rating:
R for part one of this chapter, full on NC-17 for part 2. NC-17 overall. (Most chapters are R)Warnings:
(for part 1) Extreme language, slight masturbation, psychological weirdness, Envy being crazy (if you don't think Envy seems crazy in this chapter, then I simply fail as an author and should be shot or something), violence, very graphic descriptions of gore and pain (which are dealt TO Envy and surprisingly not caused BY him...) and such-like. For part 2...*whistles* *rubs hands together* You shall see, preciousssesss.Chapter Wordcount: Don't ask. Dear God, don't ask.Blamed on/Dedicated to: inugrlrayn
>/ A favourite spoon of mine.Beta'Xd by: parallax_view
, initially, and later, perivates
will go over it, I'm sure. Any mistakes you see here are my fault, not theirs, 'cause I intermittently go back and edit my work, and for some reason, I often accidentally typo when doing so. --;; As always, if you see any typos, please
tell me, because I am extremely anal retentive about my prose (as if you couldn't suspect this from the prose itself!).
~~Not a lot of plot development in this chapter, but there is a good deal of introspection, emotion, backstory...and wait till you see what happens in part 2. Hopefully there will be more plot development in the next chapter. Envy is so friggin' hard to plot around, I swear. Ed is much easier, so I'm using my Ed chapters as "plot chapters".
Previous parts: 1
| 9 (p1)
| 9 (p2)
(No one would find him here, he reasoned. No one would even consider looking at the far end of the yard, at the carcass of a train car. He could rest...breathe...think...or maybe just relax.
)x-posted to envy_x_ed, envyedo, fm_alchemist, and fma_yaoi, and now my pimpage is complete ♥