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05 February 2004 @ 12:23 pm
Fic: Wet (Roy/Ed)  
Because we were having too much fun to quit...

In cooperation with Roy/Ed shower pics by moumusu. Continuation of Sticky, I highly recommend reading that first.

Not Entirely PWP, Lemon (Roy/Ed), NC-17, no spoilers.

This is a slightly more, um, dominant Roy than I usually write. Robin's pics really seem to bring it out in him...

just another fangirl: Boysex (by kindermorder)flail on February 5th, 2004 09:42 am (UTC)

Whee! Smut!

You have just saved me from a death due to boredom. At least...for the moment. ^-^

<3 <3
Branch: thumbs upbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:19 pm (UTC)
Good deal, glad you liked!
SUGGESTIONS? THOUGHTS? YOUR MOTHER? (Biz.): I AM NO <s>MAN</s> BEAN.officialbizness on February 5th, 2004 10:23 am (UTC)
Hee! <3
Branch: cheerfulbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:18 pm (UTC)


Angelamarmalade_girl on February 5th, 2004 11:34 am (UTC)
I love all the things this story implies without saying. There's a sense of love-discovery lurking on the horizon, as though nothing has been acknowledged beyond the physical, but they're coming to that point soon. Also, the hair-combing session was lovely, especially in the slightly paternal-pervy/father figure sort of way that Ed seems to accept Roy.

It's a wonderful story, and definitely less of a PWP as it is a moment in a continuing narrative, even if you never write the beginning or end of that narrative. Does that make sense?
Branchbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:16 pm (UTC)
*glomps Ryoko* You're going to spoil me with feedback like this! Truffles for the mind...

Had to do the hair-combing. No one could possibly be immune to Ed's hair. And it's such an intimate thing to let somebody do...
rude flower ~*pinkyzak on February 5th, 2004 12:14 pm (UTC)
"How can you be so gentle when we're like this and such an utter bastard everywhere else?" Ed wondered out loud.

"How can you be so pliant here and so sharp and hard everywhere else?" Roy asked back.

Simply TOO in character *_*
The smut is always good, but if you write a so damn sweet story behind, it's even better!
Ed is startin' noticing his blossoming love for the annoying bastard? XDDD

btw... love your scribblings and you know it *_*


Branch: open embracebranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:13 pm (UTC)
Oh, gradually... *evil smile*

Cuddlefishmoumusu on February 5th, 2004 12:15 pm (UTC)
Of course Roy is dominant! He's the seme! (...yeah, the seme I would switch in a split second if it weren't for the height rule...it really pwnz me that much =.=) See, I always think that Ed's the more aloof one because he's too underaged/traumatized/automailed/itinerant/just plain busy to pay attention, so Roy ends up having to do the chasing, and that brings us to all the stunts and bothering and brushing Ed's hair. The downside is that it makes him prone to becoming some kind of drama queen seme who just HAS to rape the uke because he was feeling so ANGSTY AND MESSED UP AND NEGLECTED! (Of course, vice versa, where Ed is like, "UM GEE TAISA YOUR TEH SEX," and Roy is like, "Ho ho, I will magnanimously molest you," is fun, too, but then Ed runs the risk of turning into some kind of...OTOME, and I DESPISE seeing that happen.)

Ah, anyways, you're SO cool, about, uh, everything, and I'm so happy somebody likes my pictures XBB *celebrates*
runanrunan on February 5th, 2004 02:25 pm (UTC)
Pft. Height rule, schmeight rule (even saying that, I *do* generally abide by it >_>). With my thuper screwed up seme/uke sense, I wouldn't mind seeing Ed do a little dominating. (...Yes, I know you're sick of hearing that XD.) And hey, at least that way he'd run less risk of becoming a total otome! (I don't think there's much to worry about on Roy's account.)
Cuddlefishmoumusu on February 5th, 2004 05:15 pm (UTC)
You've got a point there. ...and Ed doesn't make that bad a seme, it's just that I feel silly going around the height rule. ...should probably be the other way around >_>
Branch: lovelovebranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:11 pm (UTC)
I tend to see Roy as the perfect reversible, depending on the circumstances. Which is not to say that he isn't always in control one way or another... ^_^;

Magnanimously molest... that is so... Roy.

And thank you too, dear, this was huge fun! Just checking, is it cool to put these pics up on my own page? I mean, this whole pic/story arc started with you...
Cuddlefishmoumusu on February 5th, 2004 05:03 pm (UTC)
OH. Well. Heehee. Yes, you certainly can put my pics up on your wonderful site where you also have all those smart great things about Sailormoon. *breathes in the sweet smell of her favorite series ever* Mm...smells like AWESOME.

(Magnanimously molest because Roy's makes flipping skirts and bothering Ed look gracious and noble. XD)
Branchbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 05:31 pm (UTC)
Ah, SM was my gateway anime, it has a special place in my heart. Some day, I swear, I will get back to my SM fic, too.

...some day.

...supposing FMA leaves anything at all of my soul...
Jen: badassstarlightstorm on February 5th, 2004 03:37 pm (UTC)
I should've left you feedback quite some time ago. Your writing is so *tactile* - the adjectives you use convey such awareness of all the senses. And I really enjoy your characterizations -- they are, after all, the characterizations that 'turned me', so to speak, from going 'Roy/Ed? WTF? These people are weird!' ... to 'Well, it may be weird, but it's pretty damn hot.' This outing is no exception. ^_^;

Branch: hopefulbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 03:52 pm (UTC)
*sparkles* Thank you! So, you've been drawn to the Dark Side, hm? *cackles*

Ahem. That is to say, I'm very flattered. ^______^
IT'S THE WORST INCH OF SNOW: Smile more (inuyashafan made!)theboxization on February 5th, 2004 05:12 pm (UTC)
I loved the romance in this. The subtle but powerful feelings building between them...

*laugh* Augh, it makes me want to draw them. Something that could portray that intimacy you've written so well.
Branch: whitebranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 05:21 pm (UTC)
Yeah, they got awfully sweet on me, considering the visuals I started with...

*squeeeee* More art, more art! Art is wonderful!

I'm a hopeless slave to fanart, as if it wasn't obvious...
Cuddlefishmoumusu on February 5th, 2004 05:42 pm (UTC)
Hur hur. XB

(Yes, that's all I have to say. XD)
IT'S THE WORST INCH OF SNOW: Ed's really weird.theboxization on February 5th, 2004 06:28 pm (UTC)
We oughta pummel her with as much as possible so she writes more. XD
Branchbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 07:02 pm (UTC)
Oh, dear. Maybe I shouldn't have admitted that...

sinises on February 5th, 2004 06:06 pm (UTC)
waaah... your smuuty fics are always the best~ the hot shower can only make them breathe harder and faster...*drools* more smut please if it's possible ._.
Branchbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 07:02 pm (UTC)
Glad you liked it! There will undoubtedly be more, the smut-bunnies have been lining up. ^_^;
Lilaspegasus_01 on February 5th, 2004 08:25 pm (UTC)
*meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelts* Have turned into pile of goo. Watch as I climb up your leg to demand more *climb climb climb*
Branch: laughingbranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 10:47 pm (UTC)
*pats gingerly* Nice goo. ^_^

Will be more; FMA smut is way more fun than Melville.
Anruianruik on February 5th, 2004 08:26 pm (UTC)
.... *simply snugs and loves* I love you.
Branch: gung hobranchandroot on February 5th, 2004 10:48 pm (UTC)